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3. 원인/해결책 (1) 템플릿 In recent years, there is no doubt that ~ has become a very serious issue. However, there are also several ways to address the matter. In this essay, I will analyze problems caused by ~ and discuss ways to help reduce this ~. The main cause of this problem is ~ In other words Another reason is Therefore~ However, there are a couple methods to solve the problem. (2) 샘플 에세이 The d..

2. 동의/비동의 (1) 템플릿 In recent years, there have been a lot of controversies regarding ( ) Some people argue that ~ disagree/agree However, this essay will spell out the reason why I agree/disagree with this statement. Firstly, In other word Secondly In conclusion, I strongly agree/disagree that ~ As I mentioned above, ~ and ~ are the main reasons for my argument. Therefore, ~ (2) 샘플 에세이 A number o..

파트2 배점이 높기 때문에 보통 파트1은 20분, 파트2는 40분으로 하고 연습했습니다. 저는 파트2 질문 보고 개요만 대략 쓴 후, 파트1을 기계적으로 써내려가고 다시 파트2로 돌아와서 마무리하는 방식으로 했네요. 이건 꼭! 연습하면서 각자 맞는 방법을 찾으셔야 합니다! *task1에서 말씀드렸다시피 아래 예시는 완벽한 글이 아닙니다. 유형 파악 및 표현 정리에만 참고하세요 :) 1. 장/단점 (1) 템플릿In recent years, there have been a lot of controversies regarding ~ Some poeople assume that 장점 However, others argue that 단점 In this essay, I will elaborate on t..

(5) 편지 Dear 000, It was great to hear from you and congratulations on your brilliant exam results! I’m sure you can’t wait to start university, but you’ve asked for my thoughts on what you should do over the next twelve months, and I honestly believe getting a job is the answer. Although traveling seems such an attractive option, I’m convinced that you wouldn’t enjoy it. You’ve never been the ty..

(4) 맵 The maps show the changes that have taken place at the West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. ​ The maps highlight developments to the West Park Secondary School and its surroundings from 1950 to 2023. ​ One noticeable feature is the expansion of the parking area, which has tripled in size since 1980. Initially located to the left of the science block, it has extended t..

(3) 다이아그램 The diagram explains the way in which steel rods are produced for the furniture industry. ​ Overall, the process consists of eleven stages, beginning with the raw material and ending up with product's inspection ​ First of all, iron ore, yellow ore, and carbon are collected to serve as a raw material for steel rods manufacturing. After that, the raw material is melted in a melting slit..

(2) 파이 차트 The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percetagewise in the years 2000 and 2016. ​ overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of turkey, while agriculture was the most significant economic sector. In comparison, at the end of the period healthcare and education became the largest e..

1. 파트 별 템플릿 만들기 2. 유용한 표현 줍고 활용하기 3. 꼭 시간재고 쓰는 연습하기⭐️⭐️ (시간이 은근 빠듯하다..) 아래는 여기저기서 주운 샘플 & 제가 쓴 모의 에세이 모아놓은 에세이들입니다 !! 오타 있을 수 있어요. 완벽한 글은 아니고 유용한 표현 위주로 참고용으로 봐주세요.(노란색/하늘색 하이라이트) +감 익히는 용도로! 라인그래프 유형 (1) The bar chart illustrated the information about the percentages of divorces(the divorce rates) in Finland and Sweden between 2011 to 2015. Overall, Sweden experienced a downward trend,..