아이엘츠 독학 10탄: 라이팅 Task2(장/단점)

 
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파트2 배점이 높기 때문에
보통 파트1은 20분,
파트2는 40분으로 하고 연습했습니다.

저는 파트2 질문 보고 개요만 대략 쓴 후,
파트1을 기계적으로 써내려가고
다시 파트2로 돌아와서 마무리하는 방식으로 했네요.

이건 꼭! 연습하면서
각자 맞는 방법을 찾으셔야 합니다!


*task1에서 말씀드렸다시피
아래 예시는 완벽한 글이 아닙니다.
유형 파악 및 표현 정리에만 참고하세요 :)

 

 
1.  장/단점
 
(1) 템플릿

In recent years, there have been a lot of controversies regarding ~
Some poeople assume that 장점
However, others argue that 단점
In this essay, I will elaborate on the positive and negative aspects of ~

To begin with
It is commonly known that~ because ~.
For example,
In addition,
This shows that
Therefore, it is evident that

However, some people have stated that ~
This is beacuse
Many experts believe that
In some cases
Therefore, it is apparent that

In conclusion, although there are a few drawbacks, 주제 is more likely to have benefits. Therefore, it is advisable that ~.

(2) 샘플 에세이
An increasing number of people today opt to work for themselves instead of having a job. This choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in this essay.

Some of the most common reasons for self-employment are the income and lifestyle that it may provide. Unlike employees, whose responsibilities and income are determined by their employers, people who work for themselves are free to implement their ideas as quickly as they can, and they receive all the revenue. That means that self-employed people can potentially earn much more that those with similar skills and experience who work for salary. Moreover, not having a boss means that people can choose their own working hours and number of holidays, among other things. Not surprisingly, more and more people are leaving the safety of salaried job to become self-employed.

Despite the obvious appeal, being self-employed is riskier than working for someone else. One of the risks is financial uncertainty. Entrepreneurs and freelancers are not guaranteed a certain level of income, nor are they eligible for a pension, paid holidays, and sick leave. The workload may be higher too. Unlike employees who can specialize in one function, the self-employed are responsible for all of the business operations, from attracting clients to delivering products or services to preparing their financial accounts, to name a few. The multitude of issues that self-employed people have to manage may cause them more stress and anxiety than full-time employees tend to experience.

To conclude, more and more people are becoming self-employed, choosing the flexibility and unlimited potential that this career path provides.